This is for you if low conversions and weak order values are keeping you from scaling... and you want to improve response while remaining compliant.
Double your order values?
Sounds insane. I get it.
That's also what James tought until he was referred to me for a critique of his fitness funnel.
Here's what he said.
"I worked with Darren Hanser at the end of 2016 and also in 2017.
He helped me double my average order value and improved front end conversions, despite my prices increasing."
A little "NFL Replay Routine" I discovered back in college that turns lifeless dribble into clear, concise, converting copy.
It's November, 1999 and there I am in a personal selling class in college.
This is the sort of class you take if you're going to work in sales or marketing. Or if you're going to sell door-to-door.
It's before the internet took over, so we're sitting knee-to-knee with our prospects. No hiding behind the screen.
Of course, like most college courses, it was a bunch of theory and abstract concepts.
But ONE project in this class is how I beat control after control in competitive niches like health supplements, weight loss, and personal development.
What was it?
We crafted a pitch...
Then when we made the pitch?
It was RECORDED.
See... The actual learning wasn't DOING the sales pitch.
It was going BACK and watching the recording.
Looking at all the little nuances, mistakes, stutters, face twitches, leg shakes, and umms.
It was seeing what we MISSED when doing it live.
This is the same thing NFL players do -- they go back and watch the tape.
And then improve.
Next time, maybe they find another mistake, and make slight edits to their game.
But if you do this often enough -- you'll never make the same mistake twice.
And this is the same thing I do personally when writing sales copy for clients.
I write the promotion -- then hire another writer look at it, and I get their feedback.
Not feedback like "oooh I love how you write".
The ONLY feedback that matters, is...
"HOW CAN I BUY THIS".
So here's what this is all about:
If you're not getting feedback on your copy and offers (whether you write for clients... sell your own products through sales letters... send your own emails, or have a copywriter do it for you.)
If you are NOT going back and watching the tape -- I guarantee you're leaving money on the table.
That's why I started offering a service that acts like your "Second Set Of Eyes"...
If you have an entire funnel, a single sales letter, or email sequence and want to get all the kinks out...
If you want me to go through line by line...uncover potential objections...brainstorm new hooks... or want the eye of a conversion sniper on your copy...
Once you book a spot by choosing one of the 2 options below...
1. You send me your current copy in a Google Doc or if your funnel is live, the entire list of links.
I go through with a fresh set of eyes -- one that is not emotionally attached to the 'art' you have created.
Show you where you need to expand ideas...
How you can flesh out proof...
Where to SELL STRONGER...
... and if your offer sucks to begin with...
How you can beef it up to boost sales.
2. Then you can take my feedback and turn your stale copy into a real sizzler.
This is perfect If you want to have me in your corner, without the commitment of hiring me for a hefty up front fee + back end royalties for a complete project.
This also is a great way to see if we work well together.
So if you have projects in the future -- you can feel confident with how my brain works.
The fee is not cheap, but you'll find it quite affordable -- and if I do my job, the increase in your conversions could exponentially cover the small up front token.
One caveat -- The work should be done already and you're sending it in for a final review.
Once you choose your package below...
1) You will send over your current copy in a Google Document so that I can "suggest" changes.
2) I will complete the review, and send back the marked-up Google Document, PLUS a full video commentary of what I recommend, and HOW you should implement it.
3) I will record my screen and walk you through the commentary so there is no guessing about what to do next.
FULL REVIEW includes up to 5 pages of your funnel. 1 piece can be a VSL, Advertorial, Upsell, Written Sales Page, Email Sequence (up to 10 is considered 1 piece).
ONE sales page or VSL script OR Email Sequence with up to 10 emails. This is a perfect way to get your offer reviewed BEFORE it goes live... or if you want to improve response on an already running offer.
09:00 a.m. – 05:00 p.m.